Essay topics:
Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
With the rapid growth in scientific innovation, there has been rising conflict between the traditions and the latest innovation. Some people believe that past traditions should be let go for the betterment and progress in the future. I would extend my agreements with a few examples.
On one hand, people believe that traditions are the identity of the person. It was introduced to bring unity among people. For instance, in India the ganesh utsav festival was celebrated in order to unite people during the time of curfew to celebrate and also prepared plans for the war and riots against the British ruling. Every person is known by his tradition and culture it follows. Even the ancient monuments represent country's history and its achievements.
On the other hand, certain past traditional beliefs creates barriers in the growth of scientific research and development. For example, people do not donate their organs or does not preferred to donate the blood as they think that it will harm their health. At times they even deny for the postmortem of the death person and burry it in coffin or burn into ashes according to their traditions. This brings difficulty in the research work on humans body and to cure the diseases such as cancer.
Accoding to me, Traditions does play an important role for the one's identity but it should not create the barrier in the growth in future. Such should be avoided and an individual should think for the future establishments and for their welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'prefer'
Suggestion: prefer
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00796812749 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61523970955 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7951577759 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21939639385 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738125771144 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653387952363 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139657263786 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062285329613 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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