You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries.
Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
The wealth increases the purchasing power of an individual to satisfies his hunger and desires. Hence this has greatly impacted children and leads towards the problem of Obesity among them. Further, I would discuss its causes and effects.
Nowadays, people are grabbed by unlimited desires, everyone wishes to achieve, for these people are busy in earning morning. Because of being swamped by work and a tight schedule, parents are unable to get time to prepare food in the kitchen. Hence they use processed food and canned food which is quite unhealthy. Such processed food contains fewer proteins and nutrients.
Moreover, children have a less immunity system and require healthy and nourishing foods. Although the food is provided to them is nutritive but at the same time, they are attracted to unhygienic food such as pizza, burgers, and Pasta. Even parents being able to spend on expensive food though being aware of its unhealthy for their children.
Intake of healthy food helps a child to grow its cells and their body. It provides the child to build their grasping power and increases their adaptability. In recent research, It is found that Obesity is mostly found in children compared to other age groups. They also become inactive and don't exercise as they prefer to play on mobile phones and video games.
To conclude, parents need to play a significant role in providing their children with healthy and nourishing food. They should inherit the healthy habit in their adolescence and avoid junk food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67469879518 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44886742436 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2485181896 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260593448355 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114360562899 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776505717441 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123853756252 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104758394135 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.