Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
poverty, which remains one of the grave issues, has really become a cause a concern in many nations around the globe. Almost, all countries have people belonging to destitute class and each nation has its own methods to deal with the lower-income group.This essay will shed light on the prime factors responsible for this along with the adequate measures to help the needy, which is justified below.
To begin with, lack of education is the most prominent reason, due to which limited proportion of society is living as poor. In fact, such ratio of masses are not getting erudition facilities for their shinning future as the cost of acquiring proper education in private institutions is quite high, which these individuals cannot afford and government schools, on the other hand does not have well-educated staff and equipment in several areas. As a result, they are not able to gain the sufficient amount of knowledge in their studies, which keeps them behind to reach the greater opportunities ahead.Growing evidences have claimed that people, who are illiterate, are more likely to be the victim of impoverishment.
Taking the remedies into an account, it is the fundamental duty of regulatory bodies to make sure that required amenities of study are being given to all teenagers especially bourgeois society. Particularly, authorities must employ post graduated teachers, who could deliver a vast explanation about the concepts and theories to the youngsters. Moreover, they should upgrade their ways of teaching with the advanced technology ranging from computers to practical models so that children can learn with the modern approach. In addition, they should encourage every educational tutorials to offer free education to the youngsters regardless of their background.
In the gist of above content, I reiterate that although inadequate erudition is responsible for the poverty, yet I believe that impoverishment could easily be eliminated by modifying the learning structure and offering free study.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-07-09 | asmita acharya | 73 | view |
| 2024-02-17 | mehjabin | 84 | view |
| 2023-05-27 | SharmisthaNaskar | 61 | view |
| 2022-10-21 | nijam | 61 | view |
| 2022-09-09 | nijam | 56 | view |
- Nowadays many families have both parents working Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children while others think childcare centers are better Discuss both views and give your opinion 85
- Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor What are some of the reasons for world poverty How can the poor be helped Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge o 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Poverty
poverty, which remains one of the grave issues,...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ods to deal with the lower-income group.This essay will shed light on the prime fact...
^^^^
Line 3, column 603, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Growing
...o reach the greater opportunities ahead.Growing evidences have claimed that people, who...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 719, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ely to be the victim of impoverishment. Taking the remedies into an account, it ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35048231511 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90843433683 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668810289389 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.299438988 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.4 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158070075027 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517109878287 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458390481842 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785016522396 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204850079859 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.