Every nation should have a free health service even if this means that the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the one of the main basic need of people of any nation is better health service. The hazards diseases such as heart illness, cholera, cancer and Ebola only can be cured by costly treatment. Thus, much care and latest medical method is needed. However, it is a nation’s responsibility to have access to costly and latest treatment for their inhabitants. This essay will discuss how free health service is entirely neccessry for people of any nation.
To commence with, the prime responsibility of any government is to provide free health care for individuals although the health care is costly. Due to unavailability of latest treatment in some nations, the people are being suffered by hazardous diseases. So the latest medical cure technique can be hired from other countries. For instance, the WHO also provides medicine and medical treatment to developing country. Thus, the international organisations are also contributing financial aid to needy nations. Finally, it becomes imperative and prior base to deliver accessible health benefits to all residence by government.
Furthermore, the costly treatment can be covered with the help of increased tax. This approach can overcome the financial crises which may occur while purchasing such as high priced medical equipments, training, medicines and constructing hospital premises. Moreover, the public will surely support this approach as they will have free access of their treatment. A part from that, the investment of private firms is being accepted by some nations in public health sector. Therefore, the treatment is available on inappropriate price. For example, in some developing countries the health care service is provided by third party, so the cost of care is applied by them. So the health service should undertaken by government.
To sum up, it is a nation prime responsibility to have a free access of health care for people. However, some costly cure and latest technique may be acquired from other nations and international health organisations. Imposing tax for better health care may not hold debatable issue by people as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 166, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...h care is costly. Due to unavailability of latest treatment in some nations, the people a...
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Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[2]
Message: Did you mean 'have undertaken' or 'undertake'?
Suggestion: have undertaken; undertake
...d by them. So the health service should undertaken by government. To sum up, it is a nati...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'free access'.
Suggestion: free access
...s a nation prime responsibility to have a free access of health care for people. However, som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, third, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33731343284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95644479529 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0010555754 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271197343512 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870904510684 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438110955145 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184439082484 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396312130441 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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