Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the trend has changed to become a vegetarian probably because of the health concerns in today's life or with hiked vegetable prices. Whatever might be the reason the scaling number increased rapidly leaning towards vegetable eaters. Last year survey on veg and non-veg eaters perplexed everyone supporting the non-vegetarians but this year its completely opposite side supporting vegetarians.

Veggie eaters increased its numbers because of the health problem that they have, on top of that organic foods in vegetables when compared with non-veg. Educating many people by campaigning or advertising shows adverse awareness on young and old people. Many demographics state that eating meat leads adverse ramification on health in comparison with herbivorous. Different types of vegetables contains different types of minerals say zinc, potassium, iron and etc, even though meat eaters should land in vegetable as they do not have wide number of varieties. Digestion could be fast in veg eaters

On the other side of the hand is non-vegetarians they get additional protein in comparison with vegetarians. Despite of enormous vegetables taste could be one of the factor for voting non-veg eaters.

Keeping all the positives and negatives aside quantify your food in terms of calories and burn them accordingly. In spite of burning your calories still the health concerns persists then you should switch back to the vegetables.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, still, then, in spite of, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56108597285 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00018767797 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0291784834 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.727272727 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125111476013 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047643616614 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435485155028 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692367585896 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183306180951 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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