Every year several languages die out. Some people think that it is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To What extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Languages is the only best way to communicate with others. In this modern world, people prefer to share their thoughts with each other in standard international language i.e. English. Further, each year many languages disappear. use of few languages in the world will be made life easier is thought by some people; however, the situation is totally opposite. I completely disagree with the above said notions.
Firstly, history of different societies preserved in books, which are written in different languages. Holy books and historical books give useful information regarding survival techniques. All these books written by their ancestors in their own languages such as Sanskrit. For instance, Atharva Veda is a very famous books in all over the world which contains data regarding medicines but this book is written in Sanskrit. If we demolish this language then how we read this book.
Secondly, Cultural is also shown is language diversity. Every country has their own national language and in every country there are many other different languages. People can enjoy more if they dance their own traditional songs. Not only they enjoy their family functions but also easily understand their art and hymns which they inherit by their society. For example. There are many tribes in India as well as in Africa and they enjoy in their own cultural songs which are composed by their ancestors and share these from one generation to another.
In conclusion, languages are help to understand their historical background and books and also people enjoy more on their traditional songs.
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,give details of your study plansExplain why yo 73
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,give details of your study plansExplain why yo 78
- You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Monday and Wednesday evenings to practice in the community hall. You have been told, however, that is no longer possible for the group to use the hall.Write a letter to the manager in the letter.Describe wh 84
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend .in your letter,give details of your study plansExplain why yo 73
- Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:Gi 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Use
...r, each year many languages disappear. use of few languages in the world will be m...
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Line 2, column 317, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'book'?
Suggestion: book
...instance, Atharva Veda is a very famous books in all over the world which contains da...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s but this book is written in Sanskrit. If we demolish this language then how we r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60421685073 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6381788969 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193629278748 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735212796597 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065931059689 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132357736588 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1099761372 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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