Exercise is important for our health, but are there things that are more important?
Human health increases when we were young and become weak when we are getting older so that decreasing or increasing health depended by the impact of the aging process. There are many choice to treat or practice to keep human health steady strong and continuous improvement such as doing exercise, healthy eating, sleep well, work-life balance ...
Firstly, it's undeniable that exercise is very important for our health especially for old people lives. I think I am addicted to sports and do practice when I have free time. During exercise, human body discharged sweat a lot and twice as many heart capacities was increased as its normal conditions without exercise, the blood pumped more and more to all vents and cells inside body. It's not only heart increasing capacity but also lungs capacity operate as much as possible that makes human breath rapidly and speedy. Outdoor activities considerably more common than running inside gym center as well.
However, running was not the most common choice of people doing exercise. There are much more choice for selection as swimming, cycling, yoga, badminton, table tennis and basketball as well. It depended on human health conditions and personal hobbies also. Besides that eating healthy was much more common as sports recently. Nowadays, people taking care too much for their health with healthy food and drink as well. Relaxing and sleeping well are also the needed for anybody who has hard exercise or practice because of need rest and recovery. Unfortunately, somebody did not realise that and continue go straight with more and more exercise to get body fit as soon as possible.
In conclusion, human health is very important for all of us. Deciding to get good health is belong to each person, chose the right exercise, eating health food, relaxing enough and balance work-life as normal that is the most important key to all of us. Keep body always strong and stay healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... health conditions and personal hobbies also. Besides that eating healthy was much m...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...l of us. Deciding to get good health is belong to each person, chose the right exercis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43863756113 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1362064267 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2941176471 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297502573787 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941931049391 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107002383906 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174583777885 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638336097261 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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