Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals believe that growing trees in empty spaces in the megacities is more important than manufacturing houses. I personally agree with this statement and express my reasons in the following.
In one hand, A majority of trees would significantly decrease the air of pollution. According to some scientific evidence, trees absorb carbon dioxide emitted by vehicles and factories and release oxygen on the air. In this way, the environment would be fresh and clean. Furthermore, trees can decline the sound pollution on the towns because their leaves prevent spreading miserable voices caused by transport system. Additionally, cultivating trees and flowers in the cities would increase the beauty of them.
In other hand, green landscape mentally improves people’s health. As a matter of fact, Psychologists believe that scrolling in the parks, and nature can be beneficial in declining stress and depression. However, todays, most people accommodate in the cities, far from the nature. Mostly, individuals have a hectic lifestyle and they don’t enough time to travel to the suburbs. The green space in surrounding their house help them to get rid of their stress and anxiety.
To conclude, planting trees and creating vegetation space in the towns have numerous benefits for residents. In fact, green spaces have positive effective in upgrading both body and mind’ well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47685185185 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87165070012 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652777777778 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2993947319 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212185277259 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603747718437 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606635542349 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121674240246 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511649637647 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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