Few people believe money brings happiness. Do you agree? What other things can make a person happy?
Some people think that money is an essential factor in being happy.Happiness is considered to be a goal, which all cannot achieve. While money is a factor to lead a happy life , there are many other factors as well which contribute to the same. I personally think that relations, attitude and comforts decide a person's happiness.
Most people live in the myth that money brings happiness. People often tend to be more happy where they can afford only their simple basic needs.The thought of saving for the future can bring distress in life. Daily wage earners, for example,enjoy their life with the money they get on a daily basis and are mostly not worried about their future. In a survey conducted recently in India, on the income of joyful people, about 75% were below the poverty line.
Inorder to be contented in life, money plays an inevitable role , but not to the extent that, it consumes the whole part of being happy. A supportive family and friends , brings immense pleasure to all. Also, a positive attitude in work and life, matters in being content.Also, One might not need to be rich to gather all the happiness in the world if he/she is in a good physical health condition. Moreover, comforts like house, car and other supports can also bring cheer.
To conclude, being rich doesn't mean being happy, even though some people think like that. Happiness depends upon a number of other factors too. Having lots of money may be good to some extent, but in order to be happy, one should work on the other aspects like relations, attitude and comforts as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76642335766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43205041375 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9529346585 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212588849445 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850308357263 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562932323807 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137916909379 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368596642745 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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