Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
Some people have work schedules which ask for 24/7 performance. Such work cultures will do more harm than good. I believe that work and leisure time should be balanced appropriately for a better life.
Firstly, jobs which do not have off time, subsequently result in no free time for personal matters. One with family might find themselves in a dilemma whether to continue on the job or be with family. Also, employees feel drained out to such an extent that may lead to serious family problems like divorce and not having children. This can progressively lead to disliking the job hence leading to poor job performance.
Secondly, those who work on jobs for long periods may develop depression because they have to stay away from their personal life for extended periods. Unhealthy eating habits can also spring up due to lack of sufficient time for cooking meals, which, in turn, develop health problems. People working in the marketing sector often eat out making them more vulnerable to lifestyle diseases.
Finally, such employees lack motivation to work and often start searching for new jobs. Jobs which offer less working hours and more personal benefits will be on top priority. Excellent job offers may be denied due to this reason. One might find themselves in financial and mental agony, as a result. Rejecting job opportunities in the field of experience and seeking offers in new domains can invite trouble.
To conclude, few people work on their jobs all the time without leaves. Work and free time should be equally weighted in order to have a pleasant life. Working all the time without leaves will cause harmful effects.
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting you 73
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this Give reasons for your answer and inclu 78
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or the company which supplied the equipment In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting you 73
- You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event Write a letter of application to the organizers In your letter Explain why you are interested in helping Give details suitable past experiences Suggest ways you might hel 85
- Many criminals perform further crimes as soon as they are released from prison What do you think are the causes for this What possible solutions can you suggest 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offed'.
Suggestion: offed
...ife. Firstly, jobs which do not have off time, subsequently result in no free ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01090909091 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51987143841 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0806408918 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.5555555556 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158612870586 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562440408782 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356435294051 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993193538457 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338841832632 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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