Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The decline in hobby-related activities has become a common phenomenon in today's society. People's busy schedules, including work and family responsibilities, have left little time for leisure activities, and the cost of entertainment has also become prohibitive. These factors are contributing to a growing trend of a hobbyless lifestyle, with significant consequences for individuals and society as a whole.
Hobbies play a vital role in our mental and emotional well-being, providing a healthy distraction from the stress and demands of daily life. Without them, life can become monotonous and disheartening. For example, after a long day of work, I often arrive home too exhausted to engage in any activity beyond rest. Despite a good night's sleep, my mind remains taxed, highlighting the importance of hobbies in promoting relaxation and rejuvenation.
Moreover, a lack of hobbies can negatively impact social relationships and overall happiness. Happiness is contagious, and when people are unhappy, they are less likely to contribute positively to the well-being of others. On the other hand, a happy individual is more likely to spread joy and positivity, thus contributing to a happier society.
In conclusion, there is a clear correlation between entertainment and happiness. A busy and expensive lifestyle, leading to a decline in leisure activities, will result in a less joyful and fulfilling life. It is crucial for individuals to make time for hobbies, regardless of their busy schedules, to promote their personal well-being and contribute to a happier society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55371900826 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34916781804 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7234723545 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111911142554 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345357292602 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276166995702 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659892434639 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267016943174 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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