Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points of view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, varieties of movies and video games which have many features, both positive and negative are filled with inhuman activities which is attracting youngsters more.Many think that they are not good in long run and create a bad impact on the society,while some are using it for getting relax and do not find anything wrong in that.Here,we will discuss both sides of an argument.
Firstly,movies and computers leave a great impression on human's mind.There are many, youngsters mainly during their teenage can not decide what is right and what is wrong.They autmatically get involved with harmful activities unkmowingly.This becomes an addiction further.They try to follow same stunts and activities in life as well.For example, there are many movies which have scenes like fast bike racing during peak hours,jumping from the terrace,walking on the ropes and many more under the guidance of an expert.Unfortunatley,some don't understand that and tries do or copy them without thinking of its consequencies.Therefore,if such movies are banned,it will be a beneficial to a community to certain extent.
Ultimately,it all depends upon a person how much to involve with such kind of activities.Moreover, virtual world is a creative product from developers and writers to earn money and attract more youth.Though,many people take it as a fun or time pass. There are few who have taken ideas from such difficult situations and have come out with positive outcomes also.
In conclusion,both sides of arguments have their merits.There should be warning associated with a content that describes good and bad impacts in general.At last,whatever kind of content is,if a person is a responsible and mature individual,he/she will refrain from any harmful activities.
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also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44322344322 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.69662591258 2.80592935109 132% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.20767702 49.4020404114 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.2 106.682146367 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.2 7.06120827912 314% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134339587014 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683752115119 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397099670035 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789355683183 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389823567846 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.16 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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