Tomorrow, it is said that people will not buy printed broadsheets or books because of wide spreading of online websites. Now I am going to give some reasons and causes whether I agree or disagree with the statement in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, it is the most convenient way to get information through internet without any payment and going anywhere.
Today, people have already given up on printed papers. We do not have to wait for the future to do that. If we just look around, newspapers and books are often read by the elderly. Most of today’s school pupils are unaware of magazines. That means their parents do not use them either. Because they only use their mobile phones next to their children and then children also get the idea that everything can be viewed online. This will cause the print media to disintegrate in the near future among the next generation.
On the other hand, not all of the online news that replaces the newspaper we are talking about is true. There are a lot of fakes among them which are not imaginable. However, if the same story is published in a newspaper or magazine, it is 98% accurate. Because it goes through a lot of experts before the article is published and it is checked to see if it is believable. Unfortunately, some websites do not follow this rule; it also spreads various false messages just to increase the number of followers on its site.
In conclusion, everything has its own way, own benefits and harms. And in the next 10 years, the sites we know could increase 10 times again. It means print publishing could become the only source we can trust in the future
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 24, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t generation. On the other hand, not all of the online news that replaces the newspaper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, in conclusion, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63698630137 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52432340827 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.881493919 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2222222222 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2222222222 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245283155424 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599156608126 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546979554709 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113690922028 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869329784765 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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