I agree to the fact that the relationships between neighbors are no-longer close as it used to be in the past. In metropolitan cities, where people are occupied with their job commitments, it becomes difficult to get into such relationships with your next door neighbors. Whereas, in smaller cities or towns, neighbors still interact with each other on a daily basis. They do share their happiness and sorrows with their neighbors. Due to this frequent interactions, the neighbors become your family friends and will be the first one to come to your rescue when you are in dire state.
Further, now-a-days in metropolitan cities, there is a trend of living in housing societies. These societies provide a common dwelling place for people from different walks of life. In these communities, people celebrate their joy and sad times together. People come together to celebrate festivals as well. This helps them in their behavior development.
To add to above, local welfare associations can arrange for a common platform for people to interact and share their knowledge and experiences. For example, a sports days for people living in a community. This will induce social responsibility and respect for fellow humans as well as keeping them healthy.
Moreover, as we all know man is a social animal. He needs society for his mental and emotional growth. In today's fast moving lives, people seldom talk and meet their neighbors. This hampers their mental growth and they can go into depression. To avoid such circumstances, being social is a must.
In the end, i will like to say that human power is superior to everything as man is God's best invention. So, we should work towards preserving and nurturing this invention by meeting people on a daily basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
... and experiences. For example, a sports days for people living in a community. This ...
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Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... being social is a must. In the end, i will like to say that human power is su...
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Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
...eing social is a must. In the end, i will like to say that human power is superio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05136986301 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80593584085 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9359322842 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.75 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31090196318 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829601203293 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759160952448 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143842655024 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107697097936 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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