Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One of the most controversial issues today relates to gene manipulation. On one side of the argument are those who think that biotechnology is beneficial for the society, while others assume that it puts danger on human lives as well as living creatures. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and then give my opinion on the matter.
Supporters of biogenetic may argue that using this technology people will be able to treat different genetic diseases, which were considered as incurable and fatal. Especially, if a woman had wrong genes and all her future children would be born with illness. Thus, genetic engineering will give a chance for those women to become mothers one day. In addition, biotechnology is widely spread in agriculture; using it humans are able to create crops that are able to endure the low temperature or resistant to insects or diseases.
However, opponents of the technology are afraid of negative consequences such as unpredictable side effects of gene manipulation. For instance, during conducting some genetic experiments on rats, along with targeted results scientists have discovered increased level of anger among experimental rats. Therefore, nobody really knows which kind of problems meddling with genes may create and it will be thoughtless to give carte blanche to biogenetic without considering all harmful effects. Additionally, it As well as this, even genetically modified plants cannot be seen as safe for human beings for the reason that they may cause severe allergy reactions.
In conclusion, both sides have their merits, on balance however, I believe that dangerous side effects of genetic engineering cannot be neglected and the governments should be very careful with permitting to use it for the masses, while laboratory studies should be continued.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 206, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'using'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: using
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34137931034 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93199984103 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1988828389 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186917128933 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667322542568 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041379777371 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112137800967 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220239964571 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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