The government has announced that it plans to build a new university. Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of a new university in your community.
In this digital world, building a new university in my community is a great idea, the building of a new institute will bring only benefits to our community. many of them will be happy some may not. This essay will Analise the advantage and disadvantages of establishing a new university in my community.
firstly, Getting started with a new university in our community is the welfare of the surrounding people. To build up a new construction means more job opportunities, it would be good for the people and students nearby the location. To cite an example, who require a job they can come up with an opportunity, we will have new libraries, stationer's, restaurants, hostels when the university is built-in our location. If the university has opened there will be more people who can take courses and classes there.
secondly, to come up with new ideas like building a university, can bring some disadvantages also, moreover, a new building construction means noise, traffic jam, different types of pollution. Despite this, senior citizens and children will be affected by the site work. To add up young people studying at university can cause more noise by driving their bikes, especially in the evenings.
To sum up, despite a few disadvantages follow this construction, a new university will increase the chance of many young people to get a higher education, gain more knowledge, and experience which will help them to succeed in today's world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05394190871 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02341886295 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5381813333 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32987442975 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140715750102 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672403704001 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211090672242 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668996662388 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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