In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Exercise not only changes your body, It changes your Mind and Attitude. In some countries the number of people who became overweight has increased and their level of wellness and fitness are decreasing. This essay will discuss the causes and effects of unhealthy lifestyle and provide some solutions to tackle the problems
To begin with, the average body weight of the people in several countries is increasing these days. Most of the people prefer to consume in fast food outlets nowadays. It is an important factor to increase body weight and in the modern world people don’t have time to cook a healthy meal because of their morning to late night jobs. Due to lack of sleep and the stress of their work leads to an unhealthy lifestyle. Some people are addicted to the taste of the fast food and the advertisements of the fast food on tv, internet etc, is the important reason that most of the people adopt the fast food culture.
To get around this problem, the people should be aware of their own health. The healthy diet is the best way to tackle this problem. The schools should encourage the young once to do more exercise and involve more in the physical activities. The government should recrist the food advertisement in the tv, internet. The company should organize some physical activities to encourage their laborers towards fitness and they should have proper working hours.
To conclude, this essay discussed the problems and provided some solutions
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99598393574 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46389388003 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526104417671 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8661366318 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6923076923 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240186131777 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081079167282 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758617885452 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13147127225 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392087671551 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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