The government should allocate more funds to teaching science rather than other subjects for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?
Knowledge for young kids is vital to improving their competency, which makes their career path clear and focused. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that the state must provide more budget to teach science subjects as compared with others for a nation to advance and grow. Although the science is necessary for any nation. I am of the opinion that all subjects are important for a nation to become competent and strong enough to face any challenges.
However, other subjects are required for the survival of humans and to have a civilized lifestyle. On this world, irregular distribution of rivers involves experts to find such locations so that the whole community can be benefited from these natural and essential utilities. For example, teaching geography is required for the people to find natural resources which are required to feed the family such as drinking water, plus to know the possibility of survival on different regions of the world.
Learning science subject is beneficial in several ways for society. Firstly, medical science is pivotal for the society to have accurate medicines to fight against deadly infections such as HIV, malaria and tuberculosis. Secondly, the development of technology with the support of scientific inventions improves our daily life and makes it more convenient. For instance, NASA moon study plan by numerous scientists are searching for the opportunity of survival on planet moon in future if needed to save humankind from unwanted disasters.
In conclusion, while learning science help society to become healthier and developed, other subjects like a study in geography are also necessary to find shelter and growth of individuals. Hence I believe that we should equally support all the subjects by distributing the same amount in teaching.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...find shelter and growth of individuals. Hence I believe that we should equally suppor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26297577855 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8241696472 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6180622437 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211898181053 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792531036731 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461633704421 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123328157607 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030076771681 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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