Government Should Reduce Pollution and Improve Housing to Prevent People from Falling ill. Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should try to reduce environmental pollution and housing problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, majority of diseases have been caused by key factors such as environmental issues and undeveloped accommodations. It is believed by some people that governments should implement particular strategies decreasing pollution and housing issues to prevent ailments. In my point of view, authorities should take serious action on this matter for safety of human lives.
Most of governments already have noticed regards to global warming and some health issues in which have resulted environmental pollution. It is considered that most of the pollution are consequence of manufacturing. For instance, sea degradation and deforesting to provide more land building factories. Also air pollution which is one of challenges due to usage of fossil fuels. Solution of this is been governments responsibilities by assigning specific budget and involving experts supports. In addition, although the remedy should be concentrated by them, individuals awareness also can be effective to have hygienic surrounding.
On the other hands, poverty and lack of source of income lead to less health knowledge and hygiene cares can impact health conditions particularly when people are not sheltering well. For example, in recent time, there are huge number of people not only be living in slight living standard level but also some live on the streets which may cause many unknown diseases and incidence fast but hardly treat. Governments might provide strong plans to improve the quality of their life and settling them in higher standard houses to diminish the influences of unhealthy areas.
In conclusion, in my opinion, governments effective projects on reducing housing development and pollution problems may be brought healthier lifestyle for individuals and will rescue the planet for futures.
- Government Should Reduce Pollution and Improve Housing to Prevent People from Falling ill. Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should try to reduce environmental pollution and housing problems.To what extent d 61
- Children are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How to punish them? 84
- You are in hospital as a result of a recent accident. Your co-workers have visited you severaltimes and have given you cards and flowers.Write to your workmates. In your letter Tell them about your current condition Thank them for their thoughts and 67
- There are some people who believe the use of technology improves the lives of workers.However others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- A person has found and sent back your lost driving licenceWrite a letter and thank himExplain why it is importantHow he/she foundAnd say how to thank him/her 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the governments') or simply say ''Most governments''.
Suggestion: Most of the governments; Most governments
...s matter for safety of human lives. Most of governments already have noticed regards to global ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...o provide more land building factories. Also air pollution which is one of challenge...
^^^^
Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...effective to have hygienic surrounding. On the other hands, poverty and lack of ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61764705882 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03686262483 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5185767396 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.538461538 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243205491558 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788756862138 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882356380166 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144558135443 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522281799162 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.