Some people believe that uniform should be compulsory for work places Do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that uniform should be compulsory for work places. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, business firms have required their employees to wear similar outfits. It is argued by some people that this might be mandatory at work. Although this might be not convenient as a rule by some workers, I believe this can be lead to more harmony and discipline.

It is true that some employees find this challenging. Firstly, They will not have other options to wear different clothing. They have to wear clothes of which they are not comfortable with colors and styles. The logo and the name of the company usually will appear on the uniform which is noticeable to the public while traveling to work. For some people, it is confidential information and prefer to not share it. Lastly, some companies charge their staffs providing their outfits annually even though, the uniform cost a considerable amount of their salary due to high quality and branding.

on the other hand, obligating labor to wear uniform have several advantages for them as well as companies. This is reduced the expenditures of shopping clothes specially for the firms which damage them easily, for instance factory workers or employees working on filed. Additionally, some jobs need safety and forcing workers can insure it. Such as workers in construction industries must wear helmets and boots in sites. Lastly, this not only has benefited employees but also employers too. Addressing company's information on uniforms which are well-designed might influences clients. Employees of each department can recognize easily by their uniform in result of a discipline work place.

In conclusion, In my opinion, wearing uniforms in offices and companies should be a must while it has more advantages for all.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (5 votes)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17883211679 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76711901197 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2808469934 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217191601936 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069010759872 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615531332839 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144368706934 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290630585166 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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