The government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is known fact that development of road and railway is one of the most important factors, through which a country can achieve their other development goals.In my opinion I believe that government should spend more money on railways because it is one of the advanced and durable means of transportation through which a government earns lots of revenues and provide better service for their citizens.
One of the most important factors of developing railways tracks is that it occupies less space, and give lots of benefits.Once in a time thousands of people can get chance to travel from one place to another.There is no headache of the traffic jam.Likewise,travelling cost less as compared to roads. I have a strong conviction, that if the government of any state invest their annual budget in the sector of railways government also earns a lots of money from this.So, this kinds of investment should be implemented in a transparency way.Thus it is a good idea to uplift from these ideas which are mention above.
Similarly, every year government invest lots of money to control pollution producing from old vehicles and different means of transportation. So this would be minimized,on the same way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, similarly, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09045226131 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19061051441 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587939698492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.990542289 49.4020404114 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.6 106.682146367 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168043409276 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837240942212 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423876001814 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111617009353 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214926076486 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 13.0946893788 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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