Some people think that students should study whatever they like.others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future,such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion?
It is known fact that knowledge is very very important in our life.Some would argue that it is a good idea of choosing a subject according to the student's needs. Some believe that student should be given permission only to those subject which plays the significant role in their Future life.I strongly believe that both have equal traits today's people are doing better works in any sector of study if they provided with good academic platforms.
One of the most important factors in choosing the subject according to our interest helps us to put our hundred percent effort at the time of the study. We can get the people in the market from different professions but they have achieved a certain level in their profession. It is akin that people are doing the job in the same office but the profession is different.
There are so many people from non technial field who are doing better than technical students if they are getting better opportunities.likewise, the student would give their hundred percent at the time of their study if they got a chance to read the subject according to their subject. For example, we can take the example of China , there is the provision of selecting a subject in which the students are keen on the study. This will definitely assist people in focussing their way in one direction.Thus we can easily achieve our goal if we run in one path.
On the other hand, some people Opie that technical knowledge would be better because it helps to assure our job in the coming future and we bear certain social respects. Due to which people are keen on reading the technical subject. As we know, many of the today's prestigious job like; doctor, pilot, engineer, nurse which belongs to science and technology.
It is not guaranteed that only possibility of technical students has higher priority while findings jobs.Financially also people belong to science has more opportunities for earning money.They can have a better life.Finally, science and technology have also an exquisite chance in this word for securing their life.
In conclusion, better to think about the subject, we should focus on our study. Science and technology have a competitive market.It is better to focus on what we are doing rather thinking about future jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, likewise, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9140625 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75674122761 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481770833333 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8654824579 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.785714286 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4285714286 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228338088589 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782209009138 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657307690085 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118241608001 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564406551413 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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