Governments spend a lot of money on public celebrations such as national holidays and public festivals. Some people say that the government spends too much on this and that they should use this money on other useful things.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
National events and public celebrations are paramount for the country and its people because it refers to the people values, cultures, and traditions. However, some people believe that the political party of the nation should not spend an excessive amount on festivals and should instead use it for the development of the country. This essay will argue, the need for the government to spend the amount on festivities is justifiable.
On one hand, the public ceremonies help to develop the feeling of nationality among the people irrespective of caste, gender, and religion to gather together to remember and respect the period of struggle and glory of the great leaders of the past. Furthermore, it develops a sense of unity among people. To elucidate, In India, the Independence Day on 15th August is commemorated on a large scale to recollect the struggles of the freedom fighters to free India from the rule of the Britishers.
On the other hand, some denizens worry that government spending money on national events and festivals is useless. Instead, funds should be allocated for the development of infrastructure like hospitals, medical care treatment, schools, colleges which will contribute to the overall growth of the society. Moreover, it will not only provide the opportunity of employment to many people but will also improve the literacy rate as well as the health condition of the people. To illustrate, a recent study has depicted that countries spend more billion dollars of their funds on celebrating events and festivals which can otherwise be used for technological, infrastructural and social enhancement.
To Conclude, I vehemently agree that money used by the ministry of the nation for celebrating the festivities and social events is essential as it ensures to bring peace and union in the country
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23129251701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96884808586 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4659851705 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247855777737 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944351408361 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790091722521 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146415823379 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074857440837 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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