The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum
An increasing number of obesity cases is building pressure on the health care system. Some people believe that the most appropriate way to tackle the hurdle is to the incorporation of addition in sports and physical activities in schools. In my opinion, I completely agree that this is the key to solve such problems in society.
Firstly, overweight like problems are increasing rapidly in society therefore exercises and other activities are becoming must for the children from day one to overcome these issues. Physical education during the initial career time can build the habit among individuals and will help them to carry throughout their life. Moreover, things learnt in the school levels are always remembered by kids’ especially practical activities. Thus, it is a vital step to minimize such health-related concerns.
Secondly, some students can make a career in sports and other activities, therefore, involving their family members too, which later filter such habits in the family also. In other words, the parents of such kids try to maintain themselves so that they can boost the morale of their kids. Furthermore, passing it to legacy is easy if the current generation is keeping the diet healthy and maintaining fitness. On the other hand, overweight people can stimulate more disease in the environment which can be difficult for society to reduce without physical activity.
In conclusion, to deal with the increasing unfit population, the introduction of more physical activities in the class syllabus can overcome the problems and thus allow the population to have healthy and fit career in the current generation as well as in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... later filter such habits in the family also. In other words, the parents of such ki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25468164794 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83873883762 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3863362729 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196504591434 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635061302508 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510347372124 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120394798045 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635205270669 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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