More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price increase of fattening foods will solve this problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Obesity issues are raising alarm in the health sector. Every day the extreme obese people are increasing. It is argued by some individuals that raising the cost of junk food can minimize this problem. Although increasing price of such products can limit individuals from eating these products. I am of the opinion that awareness on exercise and workout is essential to cut the fattiness problems.
Daily workout is the important tool in this sophisticated and modern life to overcome obesity issues. Technology has made over duties easy and less efforts from humans to do daily tasks. Various jobs are conducted with the aid of machines and computers, as a result human physical strength is utilized too little extent only. For instance, jobs of computer engineers are mostly sitting jobs with only use of mind to solve problems and to do tasks. Hence zero muscle workout results into increase in adipose tissue in body. Therefore, morning walks or gym activities are vital for these individuals to have a good health and minimum obesity problems.
However, there are instances which proves that increase in cost resulted in to reduction in consumption of high fat products. A survey from the GST council revealed that increase in the tax to 10 per cent on these items has reduced the sale suddenly especially from rural regions. Although, urbans regions are least affected by this step on an overall.
In conclusion, while increasing market rate price of junk foods may prevent the sale, the knowledge of daily work out is essential to get rid of from these fattiness issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...of junk food can minimize this problem. Although increasing price of such products can l...
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun efforts is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...echnology has made over duties easy and less efforts from humans to do daily tasks. ...
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Suggestion: Hence,
...mind to solve problems and to do tasks. Hence zero muscle workout results into increa...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...suddenly especially from rural regions. Although, urbans regions are least affected by t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03802281369 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57358559737 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3442701027 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5333333333 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127370424632 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397862463625 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369982118272 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744105184544 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294380369598 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.