Topic: The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain in the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school cirriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, increasing obesity is concerned one of the harmful tendency in society. It was proved that obesity is a kind of incurable illnesses. Some people support the view that physical education courses which should be taught profusely in schools is the best way in order to lower number of overweight people. In fact, a deeper look into its features convinces me that there are other aspects of the issue that could help to reduce risk of obesity.
Among the numerous reasons for the thesis statement above, the most remarkable one is the lazy to exercise behavior of youngsters which takes a definitely important part of of the issue. Moreover, the physical exercises to lose weight require a great deal of commitment and steel will. People need much motivation and even strong duress to do exercise. Obviously, school is extremely appropriate to form people's physical health by daily lessons in its curriculum.
Nevertheless, what they fail to consider is how other factors exists that are also causes for obesity. Foods is taking a part of people's overweight status and other deseases. By consuming high calories foods and fatty food's ingredients, human are now facing the worst obesity status for centuries. Fast food, for example, which has been advertised for its convenience and tasty flavor, are popular around the world. Of course, by generating enormous profit, they pass over the damaging effect of this kind of food to human health.
Taking very thing into the account, people should heighten their awarene of positive living styles which include physical exercises and other factors such as living styles, foods. Actually, there are more effective solutions for the issue that are worth thinking further.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, in fact, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24014336918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56415480023 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8503485967 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17599112002 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541936044574 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600823426242 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101346656786 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336164797045 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.