A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by a human, so they should have the same rights as a human. Others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including used for food and research. Discuss both views?
Animals and human being both are living in same world. However, mankind always exploit them for there use. Its been widely argued by some people that we need to treat animal as same we treat a person. They should not be abused by humans. On the opposite side some believe that we can take advantage of animals just to claim down our needs.
To begin with, animals are creatures made by god just like us. They also have their families. The one who wants equal treatment always point out that we don't have right to separate them from their loved one by either killing them or by putting them in cage for lifetime. Moreover, they said that animals also has same feeling as humans. In several case its been reported that cows has been cried before get slaughtered in slaughter-house. Which clearly Shows that they have emotions to, that's the reason why they should not be harmed by individuals.
On the other hand, few groups suppose that humankind is the dominant creature in the world they have right to do anything with animals. No one has any authority to stop them, they are in favour of this explotation. In addition to it, it is undeniable that humanity needs the assistant of animals in various kinds of ways. Majority of population depends on animals for their needs of food and sometime for clothing too. Cows are used by farmers for farming and for milk distribution. Last but not least, any new vaccine for virus or any new drug is first used on monkeys or other animals just to see the result. The purpose of this is to save humans by watching any side effects on animal of this new innovation and if any change is necessary.
In conclusion, people have different opinion some agree to exploit and some disagreed. but we can't deny fact that we can not eliminate exploitation. Still we can see any other option for experiments and foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62121212121 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39578179966 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5633636551 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.619047619 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7142857143 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347761713906 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102788777945 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728472272001 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194040096356 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842153871357 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.