A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that animals should be treated as humans are and they should have similar rights while others think that animals should be used for fulfilling human needs such as for food and research work.
With regard to exploitation of animals, people think that human beings are most important living beings on earth and every effort should be made to make life comfortable and ensure survival. Research on medicines for cure of diseases is done on animals and takes priority over animal suffering. Furthermore, it is believed that to meet nutritional needs in our meal, it is acceptable to kill animals.
On the other side, it has been seen that animals do have same sort of feelings as humans have. They also feel pain if they are caged for long time. A substantial amount of progress has been made in medical field and it is not necessary to perform tests for cure of diseases. Argument of killing animals for meeting nutritional needs is not adequate as most of vitamins and minerals are available in green vegetables and fruits and grains.
To sum up, although some people argue killing of animals for food and research work is ethical, there has been evidences which proves that it is not the case and efforts should be made to protect animal rights.
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?What sort of punishment should parents and 67
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 56
- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.Dis 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the vitamins') or simply say ''most vitamins''.
Suggestion: most of the vitamins; most vitamins
...ng nutritional needs is not adequate as most of vitamins and minerals are available in green veg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, while, as for, sort of, such as, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7899543379 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40118400352 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557077625571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9087264384 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438685834419 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166275207301 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138063906601 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285910451184 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114709911512 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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