The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is important to consider how the online shopping impact on commercial business. some people think that online shopping will cease all traditional markets. I am totally agree with this statement ,and in this essay i am going to illustrate that with examples.
Firstly, since most of products are available on online markets therefore, it is more convenient for customers to search the websites and find what they need. For instance,online markets like Amazon, Souq have all products that exist in cities shops. Although, online shopping saves the time wasted in traditional shopping. For example, customers can order online goods while traveling or staying at home
Secondly, online shops offer competitive prices in order to attract more and more customers, and the main reason for online goods low prices is that business owner do not have to rent shops or markets to present products to customers. Also, the chance that customers have to compare between different prices of the same product, which allow them to choose the lowest price. To illustrate, online markets like amazon offer the same item but from different sellers with different prices. Not only that, the website perform comparing and filtering service between these products which makes it more easy for the customer to select the suitable product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...shopping impact on commercial business. some people think that online shopping will ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...e all traditional markets. I am totally agree with this statement ,and in this essay ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... I am totally agree with this statement ,and in this essay i am going to illustra...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the products') or simply say ''most products''.
Suggestion: most of the products; most products
...that with examples. Firstly, since most of products are available on online markets therefo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , online
...es and find what they need. For instance,online markets like Amazon, Souq have all prod...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll products that exist in cities shops. Although, online shopping saves the time wasted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2641509434 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53919085735 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608490566038 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3526118918 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170221680124 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743815624479 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053231395593 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121635877936 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172859479653 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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