The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important to consider how the online shopping impact on commercial business. Some people think that online shopping will cease all traditional markets. I agree with this statement, and in this essay, I am going to illustrate that with examples.

Firstly, since most of the products are available in online markets therefore, it is more convenient for customers to search the websites and find what they need. For instance, online markets like Amazon has all products that exist in street shops. Also, online shopping saves time wasted in traditional shopping. For example, customers can order online goods while traveling or staying at home.

Secondly, online shops offer competitive prices to attract more and more customers, and the main reason for online goods low prices is that business owner does not have to rent shops or markets to present products to customers. Also, the chance that customers have to compare different prices of the same product, which allows them to choose the lowest price. To illustrate, online markets like amazon offer the same item but from different sellers at different prices. Not only that, the website performs comparing and filtering services between these products which makes it more easy for the customer to select a suitable product. However, some people said the traditional shops would still have their opportunities to retain their business. they suggest the owners of chain stores can build-up their online shops.

In conclusion, due to product availability, time-saving and lower prices than traditional shopping, I tend to believe that online shopping will to cease towns and city markets.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 746, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...opportunities to retain their business. they suggest the owners of chain stores can ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30152671756 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56911909779 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9626425568 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177357889421 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692872876637 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477433583655 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124598647262 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178049948163 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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