The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?
Use of online shopping is increase rapidly and may be influence to interaction to all on site shopping
behaviors. The trend may lead to close down the all shops in towns and cities.
With the internet and the digital communication enhancement with smart phone adaptation, people
like to use online shopping as it is much more interactive than earlier and easy of use. Further, suppliers
promote the online shopping by offering the discount schemes, which users are more attractive with the
benefits. In addition, specially in young generation like to use online shopping not only from the local
suppliers but also the foreign markets to have price benefits while having the good quality of goods.
Furthermore, nowadays almost all the pillars sucha s electronic, aggreculture, clothing and even foods
are available on online. The system is changing to online due to the time saving and it is more
comfortable than on site shopping in crowded places.
However, traditional thinking still open the on site shopping showrooms as people like to feel the item
before it purchase. Moreover, there are segment who consider the on site shopping is a passion and
previladge experience in society. Therefore, human behavior barriers are still exist to close down the on
site shopping. When considering the economical factor, due to the transport cost, online shopping
attraction is impacted specially non premium product purchasing like food and grocery shopping.
Considering the all fact, I strongly believe that, online shopping is in demanding trend. However, with
the people passion, tradition and the unwanted cost factors imposed on online shopping, towns and
cities are still open to have on site shops. Therefore, I disagreed with the statement and believe that,
shops are continue with modernized and hybrid concept in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 41, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'segments'?
Suggestion: segments
...before it purchase. Moreover, there are segment who consider the on site shopping is a ...
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Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...fore, human behavior barriers are still exist to close down the on site shopping. Wh...
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Line 19, column 11, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
... statement and believe that, shops are continue with modernized and hybrid concept in f...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 55, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...inue with modernized and hybrid concept in future.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36643835616 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74094792957 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6960071231 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290432711292 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114617929073 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740587794976 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094464599737 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740206260539 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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