The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Agree or disagree?
In the era of technology, online shopping has become more popular as it is providing benefits like people do not have to physically visit the store and, nor they need to wait in the line. Which is actually making one believe that it will have detrimental effect on shops in the towns and village. However, I disagree with the notion and give provide few reasons to support my view in upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, buying online things is not reliable like buying in store. Most of the time, have seen that individuals have to go through the boredom process if item is not delivered the one they have ordered. For example, few months back, I have ordered laundry bag and juicer which were showing big in the size but when it actually arrived it really disappointed me and had to returned it, which is actually time-consuming.
Other than that, humans are social animal, shopping actually bonds people together, women and teenagers like to do window shopping with their friends when they have nothing to do. They enjoy surfing and visiting malls with their loved ones, it considered leisure activity for them and at the same time they get to shop. For instance, my mother and our neighbors usually goes to market just because they are not feeling to stay at home.
In conclusion, it is true that due to the artificial intelligence online stores have gain its popularity, however, shopping centers are also playing their part by offering services like playing room for children, easily accessible and tidy washrooms, cafeteria, etc. which is actually making ones' offline shopping experience pleasant and becoming equally famous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96727272727 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51930463973 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6146719449 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.181818182 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165864244724 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713901043011 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626906572036 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109892284437 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588666596314 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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