Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving the happiness?
Happiness is indisputably most important value that everyone tries to reach during entire life. But there is no particular definition of this word’s meaning and, moreover, we can’t give names to the most important factors need to obtain the happiness. First of all, it is caused by different understanding of this term. There are various ways to be happy and you can’t emphasize only one.
Many years ago, when my native country Ukraine was a part of the USSR, most people had common imagination about happiness. After school’s graduation, the Soviet Union’s youth started their adult life from new family beginning. The children were the most important commitment of people of that time. The folks didn’t care about decent job position or ample salary, because they didn’t think it was very important.
Nowadays, this situation has changed. Contemporary youth become more consumptive and materialistic. It’s much more important to buy lots of useless gadgets, drive an expensive cars and live in a vast flat or house. The inhabitants of Ukraine start to seek available job positions a long time before university’s graduation. Most of them don’t think about family, children and their own posterity. It’s much more important to get a high status among contemporaries and get obtain general respect.
Finally, people realize that time was lost when they older than 30. They understand that all materialistic luxuries are not important at all. Because when you get more, you won’t stop and you become addict from money, fame and glory. However, the happiness doesn’t require all those things. The most important factor in achieving happiness is your own children. It’s much more hard to born and raise your own young charges than earn excessive piles of money that will make your life worse.
In conclusion, the main happiness in human’s life is his or her own posterity. We need to leave someone after us and, sorry to say, contemporary people realize it a bit too late.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'in general', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209411764706 0.247107183377 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.152941176471 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117647058824 0.0946595960268 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541176470588 0.0501214627716 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0611764705882 0.0437548338989 140% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0752941176471 0.122226691241 62% => OK
Participles: 0.00941176470588 0.0403226058552 23% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.9219461975 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235294117647 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0588235294118 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00705882352941 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117647058824 0.011925033212 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2050.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 326.0 316.048096192 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28834355828 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346625766871 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273006134969 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21472392638 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184049079755 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9219461975 2.80594681477 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.037074148 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616564417178 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 72.1035135292 60.7387585426 119% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8181818182 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2302416137 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 127.492653851 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 42.1187953151 49.1944974215 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.09649122807 1.69124875643 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300854712394 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0570516092055 0.102741220458 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055730059924 0.0668466124924 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.444447006638 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.128970803363 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101612268679 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102569968217 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.242229576067 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0375326708699 0.0638462369009 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199157574597 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635972983869 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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