Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time.
Discuss both views and state your opinion. (Reported 2017, GT Test)
Money and leisure time are like the two sides of the same coin. There is a famous saying for leisure that what is this life if full of care, we have no time to stand and stare and similarly if you wish to know the importance of money ask the person who couldn't afford his food. Thus, both have their own significance and are further discussed.
Money plays a very essential role in the life of every person. It is the money that we earn which makes us capable enough to have our bread and butter and fulfil our needs and wishes. Apart from that, no one ever knows when some or the other emergency situation might arise, in that time it is money which comes to our rescue and hence plays a vital role in safeguarding us. Not only this, money even provide us with an opportunity to help someone else in need.
On the other hand the leisure time holds its own importance. There is famous saying "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy", and it is very rightly said since a person do get exhausted and tired if he is working for long hours and not having the free time, which further even lead to exertion. Apart from that, a time gone will never return thus, it's important that we fulfil our dreams and wishes when we have time in our hands.
To conclude, it can be said that both money and leisure time have their own importance, where money provides us security and comfort on the other side of it free time rejuvenates us and keep us vitalised. Thus, in life we have to look at both the aspects and move forward by properly balancing them so as to lead a happy and healthy life.
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...move forward by properly balancing them so as to lead a happy and healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, similarly, so, thus, apart from, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30463576159 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14291373946 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7512333645 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24372025818 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968561262266 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441514994242 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164496837957 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308095574673 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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