Higher salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays many contentious articles can be seen in research magazines which provide alluring arguments on higher salaries and job satisfaction. It is true that higher salaries are more important than job satisfaction. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate with relevant examples in support of my opinion.
Since modern societies are becoming more materialistic and money oriented it forces people to make a difficult choice of choosing higher salaries even when they are unhappy with the job they are doing. Due to their materialistic attraction and for providing a better lifestyle to their families some people take up high paying jobs. In India, a recent survey was carried out in which around 80 per cent of people voted in the favour of higher salaried jobs since they put forward many alluring reasons like better lifestyle, materialistic wishes.
Similarly, on the other hand, it can be seen as a common trend where people from third world countries are immigrating to first world countries in search of better-paying jobs instead of job satisfaction. In recent survey conducted in India many skilled immigrants move to Dubai and Singapore in search of better wages and thus end of compromising on their job satisfaction as they do not get similar roles and the work-life balance as in their native countries but by earning better wages they are able to provide an extravagant lifestyle to their families.
Hence the considering the above facts I conclude by stating that nowadays due to materialistic approach and enjoying a better lifestyle people do consider higher wages as the most important factor instead of job satisfaction.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90969915 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.085294037 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.111111111 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5555555556 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265986938948 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14704587796 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173744253688 0.0667982634062 260% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183658330407 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10155839928 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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