Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to express my interest regarding an advert for unpaid work at the hospital. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I have been involved with a plethora of organizations from my university days whereby I have been responsible for voluntary work in the collection of funds through various charity events. Additionally, I have also worked with various non-government organization like Red-cross and UNICEF whereby I have been responsible for organizing free medical health check-up camps for destitute people. Last month I was in the North Eastern part of India where our team went to the villages to spread awareness about Polio and also organized free vaccinations for the children. Hence doing voluntary work provides me with immense satisfaction and help in spreading awareness in society to help the poor people, therefore, I would be keen to do unpaid work in the hospital.
Although I have worked in the past on many unpaid roles with voluntary organizations however this time I would prefer to do work with the accounts department as I am an accountant by profession. Lastly, I would be free on weekends from 9 am to 5 pm to do such type of work at your hospital.
Looking forward to your response and considering my application.
Yours sincerely
Saad
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to express my ...
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Line 4, column 581, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...zed free vaccinations for the children. Hence doing voluntary work provides me with i...
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Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'accounts'' or 'account's'?
Suggestion: accounts'; account's
...time I would prefer to do work with the accounts department as I am an accountant by pro...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dering my application. Yours sincerely Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, lastly, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01843317972 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01252103309 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585253456221 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9216704606 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.9 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352445369773 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139867615516 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105057093538 0.0603063233224 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199497295044 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886728877749 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.