Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.
What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the rise in modernization, lifestyle of people have been greatly affected. However, it has also lead to some challenging situations that are as complex as ever. The most contentious issue today's topic reveals is, the significant increase in homelessness; what are it's reasons and how it can be solved? I will examine all the aspects leading to this problem and proactive measures that can be taken to resolve this issue.
There are several reasons that are causing homelessness. The main reason is inflation. Because, nowadays an average person is working on the minimum wage and the rates to buy a house are incredibly high, which becomes impossible for a person to afford. Eventually, it leads to homelessness. Furthermore, there has been a research conducted by "The Tribune in Europe" which stated that 36% of people are homeless because they cannot afford the prices to buy their own house. The only solution for this issue is, if government authorities can take some stringent action by working on the increasing inflation rates.
Another reason is bank loans and mortgage rates. As the interest rates on loans are comparatively high, additionally clearing bank loans has become an arduous task. Therefore, it has become difficult for people to get their dream house. For instance, a recent survey revealed that according to the housing market the sale for houses has decreased about 25% in Canada as compare to last year. In order to eradicate this challenging issue government need to lower the mortgage rates and housing prices.
Summing up, all the pertinent points mentioned above, I believe that homelessness has substantial effects on people. The rising interest rates and inflation are the root cause, therefore, it should be the government responsibility to resolve this issue by taking proactive actions against the increasing prices of the house and make them affordable for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'leaded', 'led'.
Suggestion: leaded; led
... greatly affected. However, it has also lead to some challenging situations that are...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25324675325 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85803557482 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0955684771 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1764705882 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151702848007 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485240611572 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462502049058 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917909042254 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039206383281 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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