If a product is sold and people buy it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. Do you agree or disagree with this?
These days every product is advertised, where people can see and listen what new items is released. Products that are sold directly, some people think advertising is not necessary and can be a kind of entertainment, others believe the opposite and advertising is important to increase sales.
On one hand, some people agree that advertising is not necessary if product is sold directly and is a king of entertainment. Product which is sold in a fast way no need to be advertised since people will talk about it between them, or through reviews on social media. Second, producer prefer their product to be sold without marketing, where they will gain more money and can spend the advertising money on improving their items. For example. in toys shop, most of their trending toys are sold without advertising since their market depend on their costumer's reputation. From my side, I disagree with this point since many people rely on advertisements to purchase new products.
On the other hand, several people disagree with the point that advertising is not important. First, advertisement catch big number of people toward new items and encourage them to buy, especially if the concept of declaration is done in an attractive way. Second, many people wait for the latest release and do several research about the product before buying it, to check its specification, what it is used for and how it work. Therefore, relying on announcements is important for many people and it is not a kind of entertainment. For example, cell companies they put all their load on marketing and advertisements to sell their products and the know how and what attract the customer. In my opinion, I agree that advertising is needful, where the buyer can see and know what he's going to buy.
As a conclusion, some people agree that advertisement is not necessary, and others believe that there must be advertising on most items where people can know what is released lately. In my opinion, I think that advertising is important and help people to know about the new items and check their needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fast way" with adverb for "fast"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...of entertainment. Product which is sold in a fast way no need to be advertised since people w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... on improving their items. For example. in toys shop, most of their trending toys ...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an attractive way" with adverb for "attractive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y if the concept of declaration is done in an attractive way. Second, many people wait for the lates...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some research'.
Suggestion: some research
...ople wait for the latest release and do several research about the product before buying it, to ...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
...ication, what it is used for and how it work. Therefore, relying on announcements is...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...vertisements to sell their products and the know how and what attract the customer. In m...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
..., where the buyer can see and know what hes going to buy. As a conclusion, some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93162393162 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83059580789 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467236467236 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6715288571 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.4 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40033554189 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142341925498 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870897922263 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263118047299 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512196966791 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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