Some people say that the current obsession with technology and the internet means that we are creating a generation of people that have poor social skills. Do you agree with this statement?
Technology is spread rapidly between all nations, especially social media. Internet became one main major of our daily basis; who do not have email, Facebook or Instagram account? Some people believe that this technology revolution innovating a generation of humans that have poor social skills. Others think this era affecting positively and making life easier.
On one hand, for several people internet and technology has become a necessary need for man and control his life negatively.First, family spirit, miscommunication started to be missed from the first day the internet entered our homes.Children's are locking themselves inside their rooms all day in front of the screen, forgotten their studies, all they care about chatting through social media or stalking. For example, many research shows internet leading to a robot generation after the internet instinct and missing their social live. In my Opinion, I disagree with this point of view since this new era will help us in many things and ease our works and connections between the continents.
On the other hand, many people believes that technology help humans to improve their social and communication skills particularly through social media.First, social media is one of greatest invention made by man.Communication is created between many people and made their lives easier, some met through social media and got married and met new cultures and traditions. For example, you can have language online courses which aid in improving communication and connection between nations. In my Opinion, I agree that technology changed our everyday life and improve social skills.
As a conclusion, people think that internet will destroy families and affect negatively our daily basis. Others think that this revolution of technology changed and let people be more closely. As I believe, human created these technologies and won't let it control him and refrain our social skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41914191419 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86080937922 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561056105611 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.403688524 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.307692308 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306934170808 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116607451109 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815488957406 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198998180293 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480931458247 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.