In today’s world oil and gas have become the most essential products for all of the countries. Many people demand that the resources which have not been accessed yet should be opened up for business. This essay explores why it is important to preserve them and their affects when exploited.
Firstly, exploiting natural resources poses a catastrophic threat to the ecosystem of the region. In addition to it, most of these resources are found in critical parts of the world which contain sensitive eco systems. Tampering them affects the coastal cities and regions in particular. For example, recently the government of Andhra Pradesh has sanctioned permission to multiple companies to build Oil refineries at a mangrove forest called Coranga National Forest which protects the coastal region from natural disasters like Tsunami and Hurricanes. These regions when destroyed can never develop again which puts the entire region in danger during such calamities.
Secondly, when more and more oil and gas are produced, it leads to more pollution since the production and consumption of oil generates many dangerous chemicals which are discharged into air and water bodies. Such actions prove to be hazardous to the lives of people and the environment. Recently, a study published by a reputed university suggested that people living in close proximity to industrial areas are more likely to get affected with diseases like cancer due to the dangerous levels of pollution in air and water bodies. Governments of some western countries have taken initiatives to reduce the consumption of natural resources like Oil and Gas and convert to green technologies like Solar and Wind power.
To summarize, it is very important to preserve the natural resources which are natural protectors and the support systems of all forms of life. It is best to convert towards renewable energy sources as alternatives which are unlimited.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28104575163 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76360861428 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571895424837 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2009070228 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183202894679 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587206893774 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664774575344 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105439219344 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759595338455 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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