An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children.
What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?
Nowadays children are rapidly addicted to junk food and soft drinks. But this type of food and liquids are harmful to children's health. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with obesity and propose possible remedies to tackle these problems.
To embark on, current generation children are attracted to eat fast food with the combination of cool drinks. Because those food items are very tasty while eating but later on few days it slowly impact the children's health and they may get too fat and form cholesterol in the body. Besides this, when preparing fast-food chefs use unhealthy powders to bring good taste, but those are very harmful to the organs in some cases those are not functioned well.
However, there are possible solutions to overcome obesity and unhealthy issues. Firstly, parents try to engage their children to should never allow their children to take the fast food and try to prepare home food to eat as snacks. Moreover, millets could be added to certain prepare different food items with millets that are tasty and healthy. Secondly, the government should take strict and stringent actions on fast food centers to check food quality and impose high taxes on the food. Thus as a result, a lot of children may avoid eating food.
To conclude, lots of children are hooked to eating fast food items and drinking overdosed gas water. Hence impact on the children's health issues and may lead to critical illness. To tackle the problem parents and administration collaborate should take care to avoid eating fast food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3585962146 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559845559846 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0110987215 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281980454545 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112045256181 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492043283994 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195119900476 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424684113685 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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