An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
now a days people prefer buying the goods that is required for them through online than going to the shop. Even the companies prefer to do online shopping. it has both advantages and disadvantages.
The online advertisements have increased drastically than earlier. The advertisement will have the necessary content to attract the people and to make them buy the goods. The advantages for people buying online is that, it is easy to use and time-saving. now a days it is very common that people started buying groceries and vegetables online and it will be delivered to your door step. The main disadvantage of online shopping is that, the things you saw online might not be the same one you receive. in other words, online pictures look very attractive and perfect but when it reaches your hand it will be entirely different. For example, if we go and buy groceries we take the fresh ones and when we order online we do not have the right the choose.
companies mainly do online shopping to buy things in bulk, which will be very cost effective. There will be certain things which the company requires is not available in the market can be purchased trough online. As the quantity increases the price will also reduce, which will be beneficial for the companies. The main disadvantage for online purchase is that, the prices and quality have to be checked with the other providers. it is advised to be always compare the price with the other competitors.
To conclude, online purchase has its own advantages as well as disadvantages for both individuals and companies. people have to choose wisely while doing their purchase online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68433178503 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2255731604 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2352941176 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278005760391 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107434928779 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625949785406 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199790257968 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046476901385 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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