You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work. Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working.
In your letter
1. Describe the work you have been doing
2. Explain why you can no longer do this work
3. Recommend another person who is interested in the work
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in connection with the tuition classes that i was taking for the compassion students for the past 6 months. I would like to inform you that from next month i would not be able to take the classes.
I was taking english classes to the 5th grade students. The group assigned to me had 18 students. The classes were conducted every alternative days from 6pm - 7.30pm after their school hours. And also, i was taking music classes to the kinder garden students during Fridays evening.
As you know that, i was coming for these classes after my work. Unfortunately, my work shift will be changing from next month and i will be doing evening shift from 5pm - 2am. I would not be able to take classes from next month.
At the same time, i would like to introduce my younger sister Ms. Hanna, who just finished her college and interested in being a part of this social activity. during her college days also, she was actively participating in all social activities.
I would like to thank you for giving me this opportunity to be a part of this activity and i hope you will be able to accept my sister.
Yours Faithfully
Larry Susan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...onnection with the tuition classes that i was taking for the compassion students ...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...like to inform you that from next month i would not be able to take the classes. ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uld not be able to take the classes. I was taking english classes to the 5th g...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...0pm after their school hours. And also, i was taking music classes to the kinder ...
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Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g Fridays evening. As you know that, i was coming for these classes after my w...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ft will be changing from next month and i will be doing evening shift from 5pm - ...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... from next month. At the same time, i would like to introduce my younger sist...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: During
...n being a part of this social activity. during her college days also, she was actively...
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Line 11, column 92, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...unity to be a part of this activity and i hope you will be able to accept my sist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58767772512 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44178399242 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554502369668 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8485147797 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4615384615 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112427065891 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407482496399 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489009316415 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654318343177 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524254361391 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.