Internet is really helping us to uplift our shopping experience now-a-days. While many people are facing plethora of warranty and timely delivery issues for their online purchases, these problems can be resolved if people do profound study about the products they want to buy. This essay will discuss problems and solutions associated with online shopping
One problem associated with online shopping is warranty claim of electronic gadgets. For instance, when a mobile phone manufacturer launches its first ever mobile phone in the new market through e-portals, they fail to provide service to their customers who experience malfunctioning of these devices. After, not receiving timely support either from the online reseller or from the manufacturer people start repenting for their choices. To avoid this situation, people should study thoroughly about the equipment and then decide where they to buy it. Thus, while buying people must heed on warranty and other post sell services associated with the products.
Another issue the public often faces is timely and correct delivery of the purchased item. For example, my wife purchased trinkets for an upcoming function from amazon, which she received after the delivery due date mentioned online at the time of purchase. In this case though she placed her order way in advance, she actually not received items on time. This way online shopping can spoil some of our important events. In contract, to safeguard ourselves from similar turmoil we should not be dependent on online portals for important events but on the local markets.
In conclusion, although there are issues associated with internet shopping, we can safeguard ourself with wise decision making. We, therefore, should be not completely dependent on internet services
if need something urgently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'should not'.
Suggestion: should not
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...r turmoil for important events we should not should not be dependent on online po...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompletely dependent on internet services if need something urgently
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43109540636 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57727286135 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8409113752 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.785714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170950548916 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577359631829 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404696576489 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082459398358 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535054182641 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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