An increasing number of people are choosing plastic surgery. Why do people choose to change the way they look? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Surgical ways of changing one’s appearance have become widespread in the modern world as there is an uprising number of individuals who want to have a better look. While such a surgery helps to solve born imperfections, I do believe that this trend has a negative impact on society in the sense that some people abuse plastic surgery and even might harm themselves.
To begin with, the main reason for the growing popularity of plastic surgeries is a desire to look prettier and be appreciated by others. These days, a significant group/percentage/proportion of people are convincing themselves that surgery is the only option to look like their idols or be good-looking according to social standards of beauty. For example, in South Korea, a huge number of youth are going under plastic surgeries, namely an eyelid correction or rhinoplasty at an early age. They even work overtime to save enough money for such procedures just to look like their highly appreciated idols.
Personally, I am of the opinion that the tendency of numerous beauty surgeries may be helpful with correction of physiological issues, however, individuals mostly overuse this method and even face more health problems in the future. What I mean is that plastic surgery does help people with born imperfections, such as a cleft lip or cleft palate, to improve their appearances. Nevertheless, people are mostly abusing plastic surgeries by doing liposuction, rhinoplasty or breast augmentation without even a consultation with their doctor. As a result, a plethora of stories about victims of plastic surgeries can be observed in a newsfeed. For instance, a legendary singer and musician Michael Jackson was one of these victims when he was suffering from negative consequences from multiple nose surgeries.
To conclude, various plastic surgeries are becoming in a higher demand nowadays. People are likely to go under such operations to look and feel better in their appearances. Such changes may be the main reason for improving born imperfections, nonetheless, I may argue that today people mostly overuse these procedures, thereby facing severe health issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, for example, for instance, i mean, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30498533724 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16189690534 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568914956012 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4579905055 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.214285714 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250763195523 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882375644782 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461140446575 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164354580185 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431190201257 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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