It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person’s life. How far do you agree with this view?
Nowadays, there is an opinion asserting that it is retirement which is the most satisfying period of a person’s life. Personally, I utterly disagree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons which will be discussed in detail.
To begin with, retired people have to put up with numerous challenges regarding their situations. Firstly, as they grow older, their general health conditions deteriorate in a way that they struggle with some health-related illnesses, including heart problems, high blood pressure and diabetes. These in turn take their tolls on their mobility, as well as their physical and mental comfort compared to earlier stages of their lives. Secondly, they are bound to suffer from poorly financial conditions, even if they have saved a decent reserve of funds during their adulthood; because the cost of their medical care, which promotes significantly within the old age, is by no means negligible, and their pensions and savings are not quite enough to cover such expenses. In such circumstances, it is not surprising that some of them are obliged to do another job during retirement to afford the cost of living and medical care. For instance, some taxi drivers and grocers are retired people. Lastly, when individuals retire, they break away from the public life and physical activities; the former can result in isolation and depression, and the latter can lead to a sedentary and an unhealthy lifestyle.
It might be said that there are some benefits to retirement, most notably the chance to get away from the strain of working life and the time to pursue personal interests. However, it seems for many older people, these pleasures are outweighed by the issues associated with retirement.
To conclude, I hold the view that the problems of health, financial concerns and loneliness contribute to make retirement a challenging period for many, particularly when compared to other phases of their lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompared to other phases of their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21135646688 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80160994796 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605678233438 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1181061751 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138430928794 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571626228359 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456573317525 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913449081378 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282224355442 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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