An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with situation?
It is becoming a popular trend nowadays for skilled people like doctors, teachers and engineers to move to developed countries. Despite the fact being such a move guarantees alluring life to professionals but on the other hand, creates a lot of problems for the native country. In the below paragraphs I will elucidate the banes and suggest the possible solution to counter this situation.
Firstly, poor nations have limited resources in sectors like medicine, engineering and education as most of the skilled resources from poor countries prefer to work overseas. Hence it affects the quality of medical consultations and education being offered. When the professional leave for overseas the native country has to face brain drain which effects its development as the talent which could use their skills to the development of its country is using its skills for a developed nation. In recent past countries like India have failed to make its mark on a global level in the sector like research and development as most of its skilled professional are working overseas in first world countries.
Secondly, the possible solutions to solve such a problem would have to come from governments of third world countries which need to take concrete steps and entice their people with better wages, quality of life and a safe environment. Additionally, the governments must improve the state of art infrastructure in developing countries to provide better learning opportunities which would entice many professionals to stay in their native country. In developing countries like Malaysia, the government entices its manpower by providing them incentives and facilities so that they can contribute to the growth and development of the country.
To sum up the only way forward it for the governments of third world countries to provide better living conditions and wages to their professionals so that they can contribute in the development of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...poor countries prefer to work overseas. Hence it affects the quality of medical consu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, as to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29260450161 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95841254649 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51768488746 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.155176787 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.636363636 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2727272727 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172557113182 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686709010723 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031265095806 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106477087763 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180187222035 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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