Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
One of the biggest problem in modern countries is increasing population , whether traffic and pollution are as effect of raising population ,therefor some believe that by increasing the price of petrol can solve this issue ,it is agree that increasing price of petrol is a practical way but there are some useful decision to solving this problem as well.
There is no denying that increasing the price of petrol may not affordable for some people but are there some believe that using their own vehicle are more comfortable and easy access so there are some solution that can government apply for decreasing traffic and pollution ,thus one of the effective solution is providing transportation system and encourage people to use that instead to get on their own car, for getting better result government aught to use renewable energy for their transport system and decreasing air pollution .as we know the main cause of air pollution is burning fossil fuels ,moreover releasing harmful gasses in the atmosphere is harmful environmentally.
Furthermore not only are renewable energy effective for transportation system but also increasing more bus lane in urban and countryside should consider as well ,besides discount one bus and train‘s ticket are more effective for encouraging people for using transportation system ,as an example , new York as a modern city with high population have applied more bus lain and track for reduce traffic and pollution , therefore every day we have seen large number of passenger are travelling in city with no traffic congestion.
In conclusion , government not only can increase the cost of petrol for solving traffic and pollution but also by applying renewable energy and encourage people for using transportation system can be more effective to solve growing traffic and pollution .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29209621993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87278195953 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481099656357 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.599167174 49.4020404114 331% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 385.0 106.682146367 361% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.75 20.7667163134 350% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171269388969 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140435847755 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806027545095 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140435847755 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806027545095 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.06 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.5 11.3001002004 288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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