Some people ethink that the most important function of music is to help people relax. To what extent do you agree oe disagree?
istening to music has a lot of benefits for us. Someone believe that is more helpful for relaxing. I totally agree with it.
First of all, if people’s mind is calm and relax, their reactions and making decision in a perfect way is going better and more logical.
In addition, the most important reason is that, listening to music causes getting off the bad and negative sensations. When your aggression, nervousness and stress are empty, you have a good connection with your friends, families and colleagues.
Another thing is, having a good sleeping experience causes to be happy and ready about any obstacles ahead. This issue has many advantages on your brain to be calm and having a good sleep especially when you are fed up your job, family difficulties and anything.
At the end, when you are relax, the rate of crime that was related to aggressive reactions like fights are going down. For instance, if you listen to the performances, you will be more peaceful so that nothing cannot foreclose your calmness and getting you to be angry. Thinking in a good way cause to prevent many problems such as crimes, divorces and the like.
In conclusion, using music as a method to be peaceful and having a better lifestyle with a lot of happiness is very popular and I think everyone all over the world has same voice about that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, another thing, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7339055794 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57567947863 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2860679505 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9166666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132624275673 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484592111273 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328464187886 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670161465147 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328300208269 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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