Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I disagree. A healthy environment represent a quality life where a good quality air and pure water for drinking are existing in the surrounding. Whether or not the city or place where we living contains a good quality air to inhale or availability of pure drinking water are highly depend on a external factor which is the environment. Human activities damages the environment. For example, our transportation mode like bike riding, car riding, flights, trains, and ships all consume and burn fossil fuel and creating energies to move.
World government makes rules and regulation and obliges the organizations and its citizens to follow the same in order to protect and improve the environment conditions so that we all will have a good quality of life. However it must start from individual who working in an organization wants to protect and improve the environment. For example if my organization has a policy in use of printers which oblige all employees must print both sides unless the customer specifically asked to print on one side only for a purpose to which we may not have control. This policy oblige individual to behave responsibly when printing. As a supervisor I can only report the incident based on which an employee can be given warning and force him to obey to protect and improve the environment.
Under this circumstances I must argue against that if individual not acting upon set rules and regulations, bringing an improvement on a already damaged environment is not possible. Therefore I disagree to the fullest extent. An organization can make policies and procedures on how to improve the environment however the action must be by an individuals in the organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...inking are existing in the surrounding. Whether or not the city or place where we living conta...
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Line 1, column 283, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...ility of pure drinking water are highly depend on a external factor which is the envir...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ure drinking water are highly depend on a external factor which is the environmen...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...e all will have a good quality of life. However it must start from individual who worki...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'obliges'.
Suggestion: obliges
...ch we may not have control. This policy oblige individual to behave responsibly when p...
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Line 9, column 7, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd improve the environment. Under this circumstances I must argue against that...
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Line 9, column 136, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...regulations, bringing an improvement on a already damaged environment is not poss...
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Line 9, column 183, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...dy damaged environment is not possible. Therefore I disagree to the fullest extent. An or...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...vironment however the action must be by an individuals in the organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06761565836 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03644858509 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565836298932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9869721503 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149119043186 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545178565813 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404419179968 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965468876872 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447996512516 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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